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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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First off, I enjoy your photography. Second, I think that the ultimate goal of any thoughtful critique should be to help the photographer achieve their best. You are obviously talented, but I think that you are capable of more.
As it relates to this photo, I am not crazy about how the models were arranged (specifically the male). I understand what you were trying to achieve (i.e. stalking her), but I believe that his positioning fails to communicate that. Even if you left the positioning to 'artists discretion', the shadows across his face are a bit too heavy. I also feel that the costume/clothes are bit disjointed from the female model.
I love everything about the female model - costume, makeup, lighting etc. It's fantastic.
Hope this was helpful.
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